(Source: http://nypost.com/2013/10/14/no-murders-this-week-in-nyc/)
Very interesting story, the headline and picture really pull you in. A lot of numbers, though. Maybe you could only pick a few of the numbers to tell us out the information that is most important.
Cool story. Definitely something that deserves to be reported on.
agree... a lot of numbers. otherwise good job.
(Source: http://nypost.com/2013/10/14/no-murders-this-week-in-nyc/)
ReplyDeleteVery interesting story, the headline and picture really pull you in. A lot of numbers, though. Maybe you could only pick a few of the numbers to tell us out the information that is most important.
ReplyDeleteCool story. Definitely something that deserves to be reported on.
ReplyDeleteagree... a lot of numbers. otherwise good job.
ReplyDelete