I liked how you personalized it in the beginning.
I like the anecdotal lead - very clever. In 1992 I was 14 and any song by Boys II Men was a dance floor favorite. :)
I love the introduction, it had made me realize how this is a big deal for the Pirates. Also, you made baseball seem not so boring for a second! Great job!
Loved the lead. Brought me back to the good old days of the Chicago Bulls! Great job
I liked how you personalized it in the beginning.
ReplyDeleteI like the anecdotal lead - very clever. In 1992 I was 14 and any song by Boys II Men was a dance floor favorite. :)
ReplyDeleteI love the introduction, it had made me realize how this is a big deal for the Pirates. Also, you made baseball seem not so boring for a second! Great job!
ReplyDeleteLoved the lead. Brought me back to the good old days of the Chicago Bulls! Great job
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