You stumbled over a few words but overall it was a good story.
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Good story, I can't wait to see the fifth estate and I'm a huge Robert Redford fan! Good tone of voice.
for a "blockbuster preview" story I would have leaned on movies that haven't come out yet (Hunger Games, Thor, etc) Otherwise solid.
You stumbled over a few words but overall it was a good story.
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ReplyDeleteGood story, I can't wait to see the fifth estate and I'm a huge Robert Redford fan! Good tone of voice.
ReplyDeletefor a "blockbuster preview" story I would have leaned on movies that haven't come out yet (Hunger Games, Thor, etc) Otherwise solid.
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